Wednesday, January 20, 2010

212. Money by Victor Contoski

The poem Money by Victor Contoski is about the bad side of money, and what it does to a person. The major literary device used in the poem is personification. Throughout the entire poem, money takes on the acts of a human. The use of this personification helps the overall theme of the poem by stating many examples of what money will do and how it will eventually take over a person. For example, the poem begins with "At first it will seem tame" - the speaker is introduced to the money, and everything is calm. The next stanza begins "It will nest in your pocket" Contoski is now describing how the money is getting comfortable; back to the personification, money doesn't nest in a pocket, but by saying this, the reader understands that the money has settled in the speaker's life. In the third stanza, the money "will delight your friends" and "lick the legs of women" - the money is winning over the public. Of course, money cannot do this, but by saying this in the poem Contoski is showing that the money in the speaker's life is becoming more of a popular thing. By the fifth stanza, the money will "repay you with displays of affection" when you water it - saying that at the point in time, the speaker believes that by spending more money, he or she gets more out of it. In the sixth stanza, the money will "bite you gently on the hand" - representing the turning point in the money/person relationship. After a certain amount of time, the person is inferior to the money.


Other literary devices Contoski uses are similes and metaphors. Throughout the poem, he is constantly comparing the money to animals. The two similes he uses in the poem are "like a dog" and "like an amoeba" - Money is compared to a dog when it is described as licking the legs of women - an act of sucking up, and showing affection. It is compared to an amoeba when it's described as making love "in secret only to itself" - this simile is showing how the money may act as though it loves the person, but in actuality, it only loves itself; it doesn't care about the speaker. In the 7th stanza, the money is also referred to as an animal when it bites the person on the hand. An animal biting it's owner on the hand is a sign of them overpowering the owner, so in this stanza, Contoski is stating again that the money takes over and controls the owner. Finally, in the last stanza, the money is referred to as a poisonous animal. "There will be no pain but in thirty seconds the poison will reach your heart" The money, before you know it, takes control; like the venim of a snake after being bitten.


Personally, I like this poem. I agree with Contoski with his views on money. Money does take control of people, and it has become a serious problem in our society. I like how the poem is also like a story, telling the journey of how a person becomes consumed by their money. This poem is definitely one of the more interesting poems I found in the back of the book, and probably one of the more comedic ones as well.

214. A light exists in spring; Emily Dickinson


This poem by Emily Dickinson is one of her more religious poems. The poem uses different literary devices, but the main device used is Metaphor. The "light" is actually the heavens, and God.
"A light exists in spring

Not present on the year

At any other period"

The first reason we know that this light is a symbol of religion is the fact that Dickinson says it only appears in the spring. The spring season is strongly symbolic of rebirth. This religion is n
ot present at any other time of the year because out of all the seasons, spring is the most religious. Winter represents death, and, in literature, Autumn and Summer are normally viewed as neutral seasons. Dickinson also says, in lines 7 and 8, "That science cannot overtake But human nature feels" - She is saying that this light cannot be taken over by science, and that it is human nature to feel this religious light coming from the sky.
In the third stanza, Dickinson says
"It waits upon the lawn,
It shows the furthest tree

Upon the furthest slope you know."
The fact that this light is waiting represents the Heaven - although creepy, Heaven is always waiting for you. And since this light can show you the furthest tree on the furthest slope, Dickinson is expressing how this light can be close (lawn) and extremely far away at the same time; showi
ng the vast size of the light - referring to Heaven again.
Also, "light" often refers to God. In many religions, Jesus is known as "the Light of the World."


Another device Dickinson uses in this poem is Imagery. The scenery she creates with her language supports the religious theme she was reaching for in her poem. In the second stanza, she says "A color stands abroad On solitary fields." The reader is able to vision this light creating a bright color, shining on lonely fields. - This also helps with the religious theme of the poem because when the reader can actually picture this light, they can relate and it makes the poem more meaningful. Also, the fourth stanza creates a beautiful picture; "Then as the horizons step Or noons report away, Without the formula of sound It passes, and we stay-"
In this stanza, the reader can see the horizons and the daylight quietly and slowly move away (the religious light retreating) Also, you can see the light back away and the speaker remaining solitary, without this light.


I really like this poem, and I believe Emily Dickinson is one of the greatest poems of all time. The thing I like about this poem is how Dickinson makes this light come and go in different stages of the poem. In the first stanza, the light is coming, in the second and third stanza, the light is there, and by the third stanza the light is leaving, in the fourth stanza the light is gone. Another thing that is really appealing about the poem is the imagery. Throughout the entire poem I could see everything that was happening, whether it was the light waiting upon the lawn, or the horizons backing away; everything is so clear.